Hah, our pages are basically the same. Not a lot of room for variation in the script.
Your room looks great!
The only issues that jump out at me are the second panel; his expression is too blank, and in the third, his forearms seem too muscular for a computer tech/nerd character build.
I guess that they just liked a lot your job and wanted to keep things similar. anyway, I don't have much experience doing comics and Gauze was a great chance for me, I tried to do all as they wanted it.
Well, hopefully you were able to learn a couple things out of it at least. Luckily I only did the first five pages, so the rest of it would have been all you.
I'm anxious to see how you handled the rest of that issue.
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Profusion de detalles y una linea clara son una gran combinacion si esta bien usada como aca.
Felicitaciones por el laburo!
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Your room looks great!
The only issues that jump out at me are the second panel; his expression is too blank, and in the third, his forearms seem too muscular for a computer tech/nerd character build.
Other than that it looks good.
Thanks a lot for the comments, I really appreciate it.
They should have just let you do your own thing.
I thought that was the whole point of getting 4 different guys...
Luckily I only did the first five pages, so the rest of it would have been all you.
I'm anxious to see how you handled the rest of that issue.
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